Do you want to be involved in making a piece of theatre? Contact us at silentsproduction@gmail.com with your interest and we’ll see how we can work with you.
Do you want to be involved in making a piece of theatre? Contact us at silentsproduction@gmail.com with your interest and we’ll see how we can work with you.
October 28, 2008 at 11:59 pm
I have left a short story on your comment section of testimony it relates to experiences I had while in hospital in 2005 if you require explanation or feedback I am more than happy to help. I have suffered from schizophrenia for 18yrs now and have been hospitalised 4 times under section of the mental health act. I also write poetry and small stories as part of a creative writers group at my local performing arts centre .
Sandra
November 16, 2008 at 4:29 am
well done on a good performance people..
Feedback Form Q’s.
1. Enjoyed/Not Enjoyed?
Enjoyed the seeming randomness of the story – how some seems like real dialogue, some seems like fantasy or snapshots of dream sequence. Like the different streams of consciousness weaving their way like threads through the piece. Also enjoyed the rich visual language esp. Erins speech about the colours of the dream and how they merged into her waking life. Funny polar costumes at the begining were good. Shining lights at the audience a neat touch.
Maybe also sometimes it felt a little too disjointed, perhaps could have a bit more of a narrative to bring more of a common link between each scene perhaps? (^contradictary to above, but hey?/)
2. anything didnt understand?
if there was something concrete that connected each scene.
3…elements that most struck about play?
Enjoyed the different styles from scene to scene, people speaking in a communal dialogue. the way words bounced around from person to person. like the dream colour theme, and frozen time moment with audio track from speakers talking about the scene and just one character walking around still.
4. aspects/play in full /more of?
Erins passionate speech about the colours of her dream. Adventurous polar expedition feeling. the group word rap part, people speaking each others thoughts/bouncy dialogue…
keep up the good work playlings…
x
mOrganic